Stay strong Soldier;Hawkstar;Male;Cloudclan

[meow]

Name: HAwkstar
Age: 40 moons
Gender: Tom
Clan: CloudClan
Rank: Leader
Eye Color: Blue
Picture: i615.photobucket.com/albums/tt239/Warrior_Cat_Time/hawkwing.gif
Appearance:

|build|A legal,but very handsome build.HE is very muscular and very thin and agile.Much like a hawks wing or even a Hawk at this.His claws aren't very much like talon except for the sharp part.His teeth,properly know as his fangs are sharp as a hawk's beak.His tail is unusualy long and touches the ground.His legs are also quite long.

|pelt|Hawkwing is a very handsome ginger and white tom.His pelt is white with ginger splashes all over his body.His long striped tail in striped much like a raccoons execpt for it is ginger and white.On some of his ginger spots there are darker ginger tabby markings.His fur is always shiny and sleek.It is always taken care of.Like all Riverclan cats his fur is waterproof,much like a rain jacket.(though not much considering is doesn't really keep him dry)You can often see his muscles rippling under his sleek ginger and with coat.

|eyes|Beautiful sky blues orbs.Often these pools can be seen resting on Rainpool,a she-cat of Riverclan that he had a crush on.His eyes are very beautiful and have a large depth.Though young he has very much wisdom and intellegence in these pools that every one can see.His eyes show his true feelings,that is if he is willing to show them to the real wold.often you will just see light as bright as the sun shing within his eyes.

Personality:

|I always will go for a game|
This tom is very playful despite the almost serious look in his eyes.He will always go for a game or two and would never ever quit.He doesn't mind losing a game just so long as everyone is happy,not just with him but with themselves.He tends to be very playful at serious times but he always just needs a stern word to put him right back on track.

|I am not naughty but I am nice|
This tom is very sweet and gentle once you get to know him,and when he is calm.He would never hurt anything unless it is prey.As you will read in his personality he will do anything for his clan.He is always very gentle with kits and has always wanted some of his own.he never ever would say a rude remark to anyone in his clan.To him without love his clan is everything.

|Good intellegence if you please|
Hawkwing is very smart and tries to make smart deisions.He is smarter then most warriors in his clan.But instead of bragging about his brain he uses them to help out the clan and maybe even earn a mate.He would never use his intellegence for evil and never against his clan.But he is very smart at every thing and can outwit any of his enemies.

|I am a soldier,strong and brave|
This toom is very strong and brave.He will stand up against anything if it means making his clan look good.He always is very strong with everything.He normally would not get all emotional,but even perfection fails.He has his moments.He is very loyal to his clan and most everything he does he does it for Skyclan.

History:

|I watched your every move|
Hawkkit was borne on a beautiful newleaf day.His mother was Tigerlily,a young she-cat resembling a tiger.His was was Scarface,a moltted brown tom.Hawkwing was borne in a litter of three kittens.His sisters were Maplekit and Snickerkit.Tigerlily wanted to protect her children so she took Snickerkit to the tribe.Mapleleaf went to Windclan and Hawkkit went to Cloudclan.Hawkwing never knew his mother.His foster mother was a gray she-cat named Whisperheart.She took care of him like her own.On his sixth moon he became an apprentice.

|I learned everything from you|
Hawkwing's mentor was a misty colored tom named Tearmist.He was always so proud of his mentor.But somewhere along these lines Hawkpaw found his possible forever mate,Rainpaw.She may not have been pretty like Minnowpaw but to him looks didn't matter,expect for possibly the eye.He loved her voice and her personality.Near the end of his apprenticeship one of his sisters,Snicker of feirce cats,showed up.She said that she had to go take him to his mom.Hawkpaw was confused.From what he knew Whisperheart was his mom.As they went along he asked questions.Then he saw his medicine cat sister and a red and black cat claiming to be his mom.He was so excited.But then a Doomclan tom and a Chainclan she-cat killed Tigerlily and Hawkpaw was so upset he blamed Snckers.She managed to get away.When he went back to camp he was confined to camp for the moon.But after his punishment he became a warrior.

|Good job Soldier|
Hawkwing was finally made a warrior.His mentor had been crying with tears of joy when the moment came.So did his foster mom,as did his mother from Starclan.Hawkwing always had his eyes on Rainpaw,becoming a warrior a week after him.He wanted to be her mate but in a way he was to shy to say it.Hawkwing's happiness did not last long as his mentor was kidnapped and killed.His foster mother was ruthlessly murdered in front of him.His sister,he heard,had been killed for no reason and no explanation.Snickers still lives as a loner.After this Hawkwing was estatic when Rainpool became his mate.five moons later they had a litter.Birdkit and Songkit.He watched as his only two duaghters grew up.He watched ,painfully, as Rainpool died.And yet he lived on.When he became deputy he was shocked.Why not him.

|Time for battle|
Deputyship was the biggest battle this soldier ever fought in.It was all so confusing he couldn't help but wonder why.He loved his duty as all envied him.His daughters even looked at him with new respect and love.He would always make sure Songfeather and Birdheart were on task and on their way to making him a proud grandfather of one young kit,Icekit.He mentored Icepaw himself.But soon the leader died aand Hawkwing had to resume the position.

|You've had a long hard battle son|
The newly named HAwkstar was loyal and we will see his life go on.

RP Example:

Hawkpaw was following his sister,Snickers.She was taking him to see his mom."What is she like?What is her name?Who is her mate?,"He pounded her with questions."Wait and see please.,"She persisted.Minutes later they arrived in a grassy clearing.In the middle was two cats,a maple colored one and a black and red one."Who are you?," he asked.The black and red one spoke."I am your mother,Tigerlily,"Tigerlily sat down.The maple colored one purred."I am your sister,Mapleleaf.I am a-,"He mom cut her off."trouble-maker by far the worst.,"She finished."I meant to saw I am a medicine cat.,"She growled."W-o-w!,"He mewed."Can you heal the wound on my tail?"She examined it."Hmmmmmm........Cobwebs and marigold please,"She grumbled.Tigerlily was by her side with both.Mapleleaf gently wrapped his tail with the cobweb.Just then they heard Tigerlily screech."No mom!,"Hawkpaw slammed into the Doomclan cat that attacked her.The tom just flicked him away.Hawkpaw landed hard on the ground,unconcious.Snickers and Mapleleaf crowded the tom.The tom saw Snickers beauty and instead lept on her giving his legacy to her before he lept away. At that moment a chainclan she-cat crushed Hawkpaw's fragile body,bringing him to conciousness again.Tigerlily watched helplessly as Hawkpaw was slowly killed.Hawkpaw said good-bye prayers to Rainpaw,his crush .Just then the attacker lept on her.Slicing Tigerlily's throat she made hawkpaw give her a legacy.Hawkpaw passed out.A few days later Hawkpaw woke.He had survived his torture,barely.But he was lucky to be alive.He checked on Snickers,she had miscarriged so her kits were dead.Then he checked on Mapleleaf.She was oviously healthy for she was bouncing up and down.When it came to his mom he nearly puked,she was dead.The sadness overwhelmed him,his paws gave way under him.He fell to the ground."Starclan!How could you do this to me!I didn't even know her that well!Noooooooooooooooooo!,"He yowled. His body sent spasms through him."Why didn't you tell me?,"He demanded."Because well she died because she thought you were dead.,"Snickers forced the mew."No!No!No!I hate you Snickers!I never want to see your face again!Never ever!,"He yowled,snarling at her.(This is why Snickers was a loner.She was a tribe cat.Her name was Snickers of fierce cat.) Snickers was taken aback."Hawky please!,"She smiled a small smile at him."Don't Hawky please me .I am not in the mood.,"He growled.Mapleleaf had left for her duty.Hawkpaw lept on Snickers,a prey-hunter,and clawed her claws.He tried sawing them off.It did not work.Snickers wiggled in his grasp.She managed to wiggle free of him and flee.

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